A night on the streets: writing inspired by Stone Cold

7 Feb

Read 9-4’s amazing pieces of creative writing below and tell us what you think!

Sandy’s work

Nikita’s work

Jordi’s Work

Fraser Baxter’s Work

Sadiq’s work

Christopher’s work

Hendrik’s work

Fraser Bishop’s work

Miran’s work

Ruari’s work

Jack’s work

Mir’s work

James’ work

Will’s work

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16 Responses to “A night on the streets: writing inspired by Stone Cold”

  1. fraser baxter 07/02/2012 at 10:44 am #

    well done nikita looks like you worked hard it was a nice piece to read make you think how lucky we are

  2. GliB 07/02/2012 at 10:47 am #

    Well Done Nikita. Very messeging and thoughtfull piece of writing

  3. Christopher Sarafiant 07/02/2012 at 10:55 am #

    Very nice I like your piece of writing especially the key words underlined and the final sentence which lets everyone think about homeless people

  4. Ms Elliott-Hall 07/02/2012 at 1:05 pm #

    I really enjoyed reading your thoughtful and very descriptive piece of writing, Nikita – well done! You’ve reflected all the senses and also shown empathy with homeless people. Keep up the good work!

  5. Ms Elliott-Hall 07/02/2012 at 1:23 pm #

    A really good, imaginary piece of writing, Sandy, written from the point of view of a homeless person. You can really sense the panic and desperation – great work!

  6. gstounenglish 07/02/2012 at 4:16 pm #

    These two pieces of work are really emotive – well done. Your vocabulary choices are marvellous and you certainly involve the reader effectively.

  7. Hendrik Thelen 08/02/2012 at 9:20 am #

    Well done Nikita and Sandy I think you both worked very hard on this creative writing. Your pieces of writings are really realistic and let me think about homeless people.

  8. Fraser 08/02/2012 at 10:10 pm #

    sandy I thought you’re use of metaphors and sentence structure was really good it really made me paint a picture in my head of what was going on and if it was a book i would be eager to read it!

  9. sandy 08/02/2012 at 10:25 pm #

    really well done baxter this piece of writing really captures the thought of the homeless people and i really think that you have put alot of thought in to writing this piece of text. i also thought that you captured the senses in this text aswell really well done baxter

  10. sandy 08/02/2012 at 10:27 pm #

    well done sadique it really looks like you have put alot of effort into this piece of text wich makes it very interesting to read and when it has finished you always wish it could go on. well don.

  11. sandy 08/02/2012 at 10:28 pm #

    really well done jordi it reallt looks like you have put some thought into this piece of text and it really captures the senses of the said homeless person. wellllllllllllllllll doneeeeeeeeeee.

  12. sandy 08/02/2012 at 10:30 pm #

    really well done to all of you all of these pieces of work are all amazing and i really enjoyed reading them and cant wait to see more of them. well done keep up the good work.

  13. sandy 08/02/2012 at 10:32 pm #

    really well done nikita amazing piece of work really want to know what happens next.this text was one of those one that make you come to thee edge of your seet and get really stuck into the book. to achieve this you have really captured the senses and the thought of the person you are talking about. really well done nikita keep it up.

  14. Ms Elliott-Hall 11/02/2012 at 7:29 pm #

    Well done everyone! I’ve really enjoyed reading your individual pieces. You’ve all put in a lot of effort on this task, writing really imaginatively, including use of metaphor and lots of adjectives.

  15. Louise Kemp 13/02/2012 at 4:43 pm #

    I am extremely impressed with all the hard work put into each of these pieces – I thoroughly enjoyed reading each one, there are some very talented writers amongst you. I am also very pleased to see how much encouragement you have given one another – I look forward to reading more of your work – keep it up =)

  16. gstounenglish 14/02/2012 at 5:15 pm #

    Such a lot of effort has gone into these pieces: well done! Congratulations muct go to Ruari and Sandy who are the worthy recipients of the prizes for best writer and best commentor. Brilliant job! Mrs Sapsford 🙂

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